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[原创] 看图作文,和微风君《七绝》夕阳晚照  

2011-04-27 09:25:14|  分类: 默认分类 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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《七绝》夕阳晚照 - 微风 - 2008shlok的博客

                                                                                                                                                                      (图取微风博页}

                                                                                          文/萧潇雨

                              暮色苍苍日西斜,层林尽染送晚霞。

                              我叹孤鹜追云去,飘篷江海漫嗟讶!

 

 

 

                                                                                       微风老师原玉:

                              孤鹜晨飞接晚霞,寂林晚照镀金纱。

                              溪边墨客痴情语,月地云阶幻景花。

 

 

                                                                                       缘故老师赠玉:

                                                                孤雁扶摇上九天,弄霞轻舞落山川。

                                                                江河尽染人先醉,不赋诗词枉做仙!


 

 

                                                                                  枫叶红老师赠诗(2首):

                                                                         《七绝:夕阳未必就黄昏》

                                                                  苍松吐翠劲虬枝,雨雪风霜逸韵驰。
                                                                         霞浸夕阳枫叶舞,红涛绿浪涌新诗。
                                                                                              (二)
                                                                         风雨兼程问几村?烟云散去不留痕。
                                                                         人生驿站春秋著,夕阳韵灿靓黄昏。


 

                                                                                          岿砂老师赠玉:

                                                                                 远归何计暮途遥

                                                                                 倦飞还林苦寻梢

                                                                                 不知谁将枯枝染 

                                                                                 昔日旧穴变金巢


 

 

                                                                                           素雅清香赠玉:

                                                                                  暮落黄昏夕阳红

                                                                                  万物静谧夜空明

                                                                                  黄金尽染遍大地

                                                                                  心海茫茫似孤云


                                                                                       花季少年老师和玉:

                                                                                  鹰击长空晚霞红

                                                                                  暮色苍茫如微风

                                                                                  人生易老不服老

                                                                                  驱云拨雾奔前程


 

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